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Submitted Mon, 07/23/2012 - 16:25 by tiger child (10 votes) you pull your collar up to protect your neck against the damp air fumbling inconsistently from the sea. there may be a race tomorrow, but tonight there's nothing but this crummy port city. any number of clubs offering only vulgar neon. your eyes are watering - the ash is falling again from some far off place. from F-Zero |
Heh, it was a cool take.
Heh, it was a cool take.
heh, thank you.
heh, thank you.
neat
neat
gracias
gracias
yes
yes
sí
sí
Some seriously nice tone
Some seriously nice tone going on here.
thanks. makes me wish my
thanks. makes me wish my brother and i lived nearer each other. we'd be doing things like this all the time.
Your written introduction
Your written introduction gave even more depth to the arrangement.
Big Blue, the night before.
Originality and depth.
im glad it served its
im glad it served its purpose. imagery and context can make all the difference. thanks!
Absolutely. You envisioned
Absolutely. You envisioned the scene and allowed us to see through you
...Yeahhhh...
...Yeahhhh...
One of the coolest and most
One of the coolest and most unique arrangements I've seen. Love the writing too. Very nice!
wow, that means a lot. thank
wow, that means a lot. thank you.
I give credit where it is
I give credit where it is due. I shared it on my Facebook too
im good with that. i almost
im good with that. i almost never ever look at facebook.
Good for you (seriously). I
Good for you (seriously). I avoid tv and radio, but the internet makes up for it :sigh:
oh yeah. i was never much
oh yeah. i was never much into that whole thing. i dont listen to radio ever. i got cable for the first time in years when i moved to where im living now so i could watch the playoffs for basketball and have since not canceled, though i nearly never watch. but yeah, the internet is kind of a monster.
I love this arrangement.
I love this arrangement. Espescially how you set the mood with the writing.
It made me feel like I was following Winston Smith(from the book "1984") through a futuristic, neo-nazi F-Zero city. Victory neon signs hehe Super chill man :)
thats wonderful. 1984 is a
thats wonderful. 1984 is a classic.
the image and feel i have in my head for it is really strong, so anything it can evoke from someone similar is fantastic.
and thank you tons. i hope at some point to do it as a trio live with my brother and get someone with an upright bass and use a jazz guitar (rather than electric bass and classical guitar).
you cant say something that
you cant say something that fantastical and then not deliver
make it happen
i'll see what i can do.
i'll see what i can do.