OK. I finally made a recording and I put effort into it. Took me something like 2 hours ( a huuuge time for me ) . . . and here it is.
Even if I still think that real guitar play have nothing to do with pc / program / sh!t like that, I have to admit that all this stuff is kinda fun & can make it really easy ( I mean cut, edit, etc, if you put lot of time in this pc stuff and you are good at it you can do & fix everything ) ( But I still prefere so much to just play guitar with an amp - or unplugged - and anything else around ). The guitar sound so bad, I know ( and I did many mistake too ) but there is really no way to get a better sound for me now without spending money ( I really try everything in this days & thats the best I can have ). You like it ? Thanks ! You hate it ? I really don't mind, I'm proud of what I did ( I love how the chords sound at the begin ).
Thanks for everyone who cheer me in a way or in another.
LoL . . . I saved the work, maybe I will re-record it :3
Cmon it wasnt that bad :3
Reminds me my old recordings, with poor sound quality (not your fault). Not bad but perfectable, work a bit more on your songs and that would do the job =)
Submitted by auriplane on Wed, 09/07/2011 - 04:20.
Now that you can get decent quality audio, you should focus on the arrangement and performance aspects more.
Three problems, from most important to least:
1. The notes are wrong.
2. The backing sounds machine-like and unnatural.
3. Rhythm
How did you make the drums? It helps if you don't play the exact same drum sample at the same velocity repeatedly. That makes a "machine gun" effect, where the ear picks up on the similarity and it sounds unnatural (especially in drum rolls, which are where the name "machine gun" comes from).
It WAS a big improvement! I'm just giving constructive criticism in case you want an idea of what you should work on NEXT.
Submitted by auriplane on Wed, 09/07/2011 - 05:33.
It might seem harsh since I'm trying to give constructive criticism, and I generally try to be as straightforward as possible when I phrase things, but I did think it was a big step up for Pasto, and I hope he does more :-)
That's what we all hope ! And don't worry, by putting your fingers on our defaults you make us improve, you're the one who gave me the will to be more serious with my recordings ! and i thank you for that :)
Thanks for your comment Snail Cutie ! The drum was take from a midi file TwT
Well what am I working on now ? Hem . . . * runs away *
The fact is that I allways learn a song and record it in like 15 minutes.
Now I want to work on learning a song for more time. like learn it and take time to make it in my way and THAN record it. I really don't know what to do, I think at Gourmet Race from Kirby ( one time I spend some time on that and it come out something good ) ( I'm not so bad if I put time into it ), but I don't know, maybe something from FFV !
I know what you mean about being broke Pasto. I want to get an Ibanez RG so bad, I just can't afford it right now. I KNOW people will enjoy my playing a lot more when I have a decent guitar. My skill is past a cheap knockoff guitar, I know that much.
If you KNOW that you made
If you KNOW that you made mistakes, re record it.
LoL . . . I saved the work,
LoL . . . I saved the work, maybe I will re-record it :3
Cmon it wasnt that bad :3
Pasto said LoL . . . I saved
Pasto said
Reminds me my old recordings, with poor sound quality (not your fault). Not bad but perfectable, work a bit more on your songs and that would do the job =)
Awesome! For your first try,
Awesome! For your first try, Pasta-bro.
Keep at it. The sound
Keep at it. The sound quality beats your other stuff so far.
good job not being banned
good job not being banned yet.
Hey, nice improvement. The
Hey, nice improvement. The bassline is all sorts of wrong, but the audio quality on this recording is way better than your old stuff :-)
Thanks ! It was just a "first
Thanks ! It was just a "first try" , I will probably do better stuff.
Now that you can get decent
Now that you can get decent quality audio, you should focus on the arrangement and performance aspects more.
Three problems, from most important to least:
1. The notes are wrong.
2. The backing sounds machine-like and unnatural.
3. Rhythm
How did you make the drums? It helps if you don't play the exact same drum sample at the same velocity repeatedly. That makes a "machine gun" effect, where the ear picks up on the similarity and it sounds unnatural (especially in drum rolls, which are where the name "machine gun" comes from).
It WAS a big improvement! I'm just giving constructive criticism in case you want an idea of what you should work on NEXT.
Auriplane is like a mother,
Auriplane is like a mother, she can be sever but it's always to make us better :D
What Song are you working now Pasto ?
It might seem harsh since I'm
It might seem harsh since I'm trying to give constructive criticism, and I generally try to be as straightforward as possible when I phrase things, but I did think it was a big step up for Pasto, and I hope he does more :-)
That's what we all hope ! And
That's what we all hope ! And don't worry, by putting your fingers on our defaults you make us improve, you're the one who gave me the will to be more serious with my recordings ! and i thank you for that :)
Thanks for your comment Snail
Thanks for your comment Snail Cutie ! The drum was take from a midi file TwT
Well what am I working on now ? Hem . . . * runs away *
The fact is that I allways learn a song and record it in like 15 minutes.
Now I want to work on learning a song for more time. like learn it and take time to make it in my way and THAN record it. I really don't know what to do, I think at Gourmet Race from Kirby ( one time I spend some time on that and it come out something good ) ( I'm not so bad if I put time into it ), but I don't know, maybe something from FFV !
Hey I'm working on Gourmet
Hey I'm working on Gourmet Race too!! :D
Oh and btw I will probably
Oh and btw I will probably make a video ( this time with a good angle ) next time ^-^
Oh which form ff5 ?
Oh which form ff5 ?
I made a "Price of Freedom"
I made a "Price of Freedom" recording, but I'm not happy of the final result °__°
hey then just keep trying! i
hey then just keep trying! i bet it will sound awesome when it's done! :)
Where's the video?? I know
Where's the video??
I know what you mean about being broke Pasto. I want to get an Ibanez RG so bad, I just can't afford it right now. I KNOW people will enjoy my playing a lot more when I have a decent guitar. My skill is past a cheap knockoff guitar, I know that much.