Submitted by StrangeJam on Fri, 12/09/2011 - 16:28.
You did a nice job with the drumtrack!
however I have some observations since you wanted constructive criticism.
The clean guitar intro was pretty nice, however I think your rhythm guitar tone needs some work, needs more mids for sure.Some minor tempo and accuracy issues here and there, nothing bad enough to make me ragequit the recording. your lead guitar needs more dynamics, expresiveness, more spice, start doing vibratos,bendings,slides, stuff liek that really adds value to any melody played by lead guitar. you have some pretty nice instruments, people can only improve!
Submitted by Jono.andrade on Sun, 12/25/2011 - 09:01.
Hey mate sounds good, but yeah as they said just a few of them were a bit off. Heres a tip of how to get it right. Play zeldas lullaby backwards ;) and youve got it lol. its that simple haha. But sounded good!
You did a nice job with the
You did a nice job with the drumtrack!
however I have some observations since you wanted constructive criticism.
The clean guitar intro was pretty nice, however I think your rhythm guitar tone needs some work, needs more mids for sure.Some minor tempo and accuracy issues here and there, nothing bad enough to make me ragequit the recording. your lead guitar needs more dynamics, expresiveness, more spice, start doing vibratos,bendings,slides, stuff liek that really adds value to any melody played by lead guitar. you have some pretty nice instruments, people can only improve!
I agree, some technique would
I agree, some technique would really set this off.
thanks guys! i'll try playing
thanks guys!
i'll try playing around with the rhythm guitar tone in my future records, honestly i'm also a bit dissatisfied with it ;)
Hey mate sounds good, but
Hey mate sounds good, but yeah as they said just a few of them were a bit off. Heres a tip of how to get it right. Play zeldas lullaby backwards ;) and youve got it lol. its that simple haha. But sounded good!