Looks better. I played
hslesperanceLocation: Walpole, MA Joined: Aug 10 2008 |
Looks better. I played through it again and noticed a couple other things that could be changed. This part is around 1:02 in the song, the notes in bold are changed. Where I put a C there should be a low C# note in that chord. It wouldn't be playable without tuning the low E string down, so you don't need to include it, just pointing out that the note is there if you didn't hear it yourself. |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| Q E Q E Q E Q Q E Q E Q E Q E Q E Q Q E Q E Q E Q E Q E Q |--0---------12------------|--7-----------------------|--------------12--------0-|--L-----------------------| |--------------------------|--------------------------|--10----------------------|--------------------------| |--------------------------|------------9-L-----------|--------------------------|------------9-L-----------| |--------7---9-L---7-------|--------9---------9-------|--------10--------10------|--------9-----------------| |------7-------------7-----|------11------------11----|------10------------10----|------7-------------7-----| |--5-----------------------|--9---------------------9-|--8---------------------7-|--L---------------0-------| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| Arpeggio Arpeggio |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| |-3-| Q E Q Q E Q Q Q Q E Q H Q Q E Q E Q E Q E Q |--0-----------5-----------|--12----------14----------|--12----------7---------5-|--L-----------------------| |--------------------------|--9-----------------------|--10----------------------|--------------------------| |--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------|------------6-------------| |--------7-----------------|--------------------------|--------------------------|--------7-----9---7-------| |------7-----------7-------|--------------------------|--------------5-----------|------7-------------7-----| |--5-----------------5-----|--C-----9---------9p-0----|--10----------0---------5-|--L-----------------------| Also the second and third to last chords of the song sound more like this to me, but I'm not too sure H. Q W Q H. H H |--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------|| |--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------|| |-------------------2------|--L-----------------------|--L-----2-----------------|--2----------2------------|| |-------------------2------|--L-----------------------|--L-----5-----------------|--4----------2------------|| |-------------------4------|--L-----------------------|--L-----3-----------------|--2-----------------------|| |--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------|-------------0------------||
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My Original Songs - https://soundcloud.com/hslesperance |
Re: Looks better. I played
AlleeelexJoined: Jun 10 2015 |
Thanks! I included your changes and uploaded a new version of the tab. Yeah, I didn't notice those, and I agree those chords sound better. I might have made a mistake when I was originally incorporating thamkinjuhn's corrections there. |
Alright, it's updated!
hslesperanceLocation: Walpole, MA Joined: Aug 10 2008 |
Alright, it's updated!
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My Original Songs - https://soundcloud.com/hslesperance |
Re: Alright, it's updated!
AlleeelexJoined: Jun 10 2015 |
Awesome, thanks! |
Alleeelex
Joined: Jun 10 2015
Hello, I originally submitted my transcription for Home last month and it was recently approved. Thamkinjuhn has been a big help and pointed out a few corrections. This tab is now about as accurate to the original song as you can get.
Undertale - Home (Revised version 2)