Link what I was talking about on youtube are the notes at around 20sec or 21sec and after that(the part right after the intro). Compare it to the same part on jit's recording to see what I mean. Idk it just sounded kind of weird to me.
No, it's not. The melody is right, but the harmonization doesn't quite work.
The F natural at :36 feels off to me. I want it to be an D#. Then again at :43, the original song does C# D#, not F natural F sharp.
These four all have one thing in common: they all go below the lowest note on the bottom string! I feel like that might be why Link had trouble finding them. (Of course, they can all be played an octave up.)
As I said before, you don't have to do everything like the original, but the F natural feels a little off to my ear. I think this recording sounds a lot better in terms of tone though :-)
When I said "needs bass", I didn't mean the bass EQ, so much as an actual bass, BTW :-D
EDIT: Btw Link, although I'm focusing on criticism, I can tell you're getting better by leaps and bounds! Keep it up :-D
Nice hash! But the drums may be a bit too loud :) and auri and ranulf, for the melody it does sound kinda off and out of place but when you play it to the song it fits perfectly. and auri, thanks for all the critism, it has REALLY helped me, more than I thought it would actually :) and for the bass, I am actually playing it :) and on more thing, how does the harmony sound at 0:52? thanks!
LS07 : ok for a metal cover, do you like more a fast tempo like heavy metal or something slower and louder ?
Auri : it sounds good to me, what do you mean by "not right" ? :$
Hashel: Like for example, the five notes at the end of the main phrase, like at :13. If memory serves, those five notes should be F# G Eb D C. Maybe you could compare to the original song?
Even if it's MIDI bass, you should make it audible, BTW.
so basically, you just put the palm of your strumming hand on the strings, near the bridge, and you play. it is meant to be used on 6th, 5th and 4th string (most of the time). you should be able to alternate palm muted and normal playing, it's the basics of metal. do you see what I mean?
I suggest you to learn some songs from metal bands like metallica, megadeath, anthrax, ... it will be a good exercise. I can give you some guitar pro tabs to practice if you want, just drop me a pm.
thanks for the tips :) and for recording, I'm using my USB cord that came with my amp. i'll try to find one thats less fuzzy but thats how all the presets sound :( tell me what you think of my next one if i can find a better tone. Thanks :)
if you record with a clean tone and add distortion in via editing software it will most likely come out sounding a lot better
edit: this might make the palm muting sound like poop though, im not sure D:
oh ya good idea jacob! I'll try that after i re-record again, but for now this is what i've got Otherworld
it's obviously not even close to being done (mixing, effects, noise removal, ect.) but for what it is now, I'd like your opinion, and yes, i am going to add lyrics :)
ok final thing, haha, yes i sang... Otherworld
please tell me what ya think! thanks :)
EDIT: i'd also like to know how the mixng is (im still perfecting that)
i think a clean singing wouldn't be bad too !
Use delay on the lead, the bends at the beguining needs more "power", do you play them on 1 or 2 strings ?
forgot the delay sorry...
the bend are on 2 stings : the 1st one on the 10th fret E string and the 13th fret B string.
the 2nd one on the 10th fret B string and 12th fret G string :)
Link what I was talking about
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Link what I was talking about on youtube are the notes at around 20sec or 21sec and after that(the part right after the intro). Compare it to the same part on jit's recording to see what I mean. Idk it just sounded kind of weird to me.
Oh, you mean the harmony, not
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Oh, you mean the harmony, not the melody, Ranulf? I didn't listen that far last time because I hit stop and went to type up the intro ^-^;
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Re: Oh, you mean the harmony, not
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Yeah, is it just me, or what?
No, it's not. The melody is
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No, it's not. The melody is right, but the harmonization doesn't quite work.
The F natural at :36 feels off to me. I want it to be an D#. Then again at :43, the original song does C# D#, not F natural F sharp.
These four all have one thing in common: they all go below the lowest note on the bottom string! I feel like that might be why Link had trouble finding them. (Of course, they can all be played an octave up.)
As I said before, you don't have to do everything like the original, but the F natural feels a little off to my ear. I think this recording sounds a lot better in terms of tone though :-)
When I said "needs bass", I didn't mean the bass EQ, so much as an actual bass, BTW :-D
EDIT: Btw Link, although I'm focusing on criticism, I can tell you're getting better by leaps and bounds! Keep it up :-D
Auriplane!!
Untif we found how to play
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Untif we found how to play ALWTG i did alittle recording today, plz tell me if i have to change something =)
Boss Battle Theme
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Nice hash! But the drums may
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Nice hash! But the drums may be a bit too loud :) and auri and ranulf, for the melody it does sound kinda off and out of place but when you play it to the song it fits perfectly. and auri, thanks for all the critism, it has REALLY helped me, more than I thought it would actually :) and for the bass, I am actually playing it :) and on more thing, how does the harmony sound at 0:52? thanks!
okay ^^ i'm waiting for othe
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okay ^^ i'm waiting for othe critisisms ^^
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Oh.. Sorry, I didn't know
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Oh.. Sorry, I didn't know there was a bass ^-^;;;
The harmony is great! I also like the contrast when instruments come in / out, so it isn't the same set of instruments playing the entire way.
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auriiii may i have your
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auriiii may i have your opinion on my work plzzzz ?
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Uh.. the notes aren't quite
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Uh.. the notes aren't quite right, Hashel ^-^;
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it's ok :) and sorry bit are
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it's ok :) and sorry bit are you talking about mine or hashel's? and i think the wrong one uploaded for mine. here's the actuall one im using.
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Damned, where? =X
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Only my last comment was
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Only my last comment was about Hashel's. I like the harmony in yours a lot, Link :-D
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Thanks auri, and I'm working
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Thanks auri, and I'm working on the drums for our collab hash. Can we do a metal cover?
^-^;;
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^-^;;
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LS07 : ok for a metal cover,
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LS07 : ok for a metal cover, do you like more a fast tempo like heavy metal or something slower and louder ?
Auri : it sounds good to me, what do you mean by "not right" ? :$
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slow and loud!! oh ya :)
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slow and loud!! oh ya :)
Like for example, the five
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Hashel: Like for example, the five notes at the end of the main phrase, like at :13. If memory serves, those five notes should be F# G Eb D C. Maybe you could compare to the original song?
Even if it's MIDI bass, you should make it audible, BTW.
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oh it's G# A F D C# on my tab
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oh it's G# A F D C# on my tab xD
OKAY so i have to up the bass and down the drums...
Exept the 5 notes, is the other parts "good" ?
ps: i really have to buy some ears xD
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Umm.. I don't want to
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Umm.. I don't want to volunteer my time for note checking right now sorry ^-^;
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lol no problem, just do you
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lol no problem, just do you think if i change this part it will soud globally okay ? ^^
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Never played the game, but
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Never played the game, but Rydia's theme would be good as a duo if you gotz a tab that will be easy enough for me to play
Rydia I got this, but maybe
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Rydia
I got this, but maybe we cna make some arragement ?
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Boss Battle Theme Here is,
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Boss Battle Theme
Here is, but i'm not happy of my tones and my playing ~~
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alright, otherworld ff10. its
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alright, otherworld ff10. its really rough (as always) and this time I want to hear how the tone of my rhythm guitar sounds.
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doesnt sound half bad
time to learn palm mutting
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time to learn palm mutting strife
so basically, you just put the palm of your strumming hand on the strings, near the bridge, and you play. it is meant to be used on 6th, 5th and 4th string (most of the time). you should be able to alternate palm muted and normal playing, it's the basics of metal. do you see what I mean?
I suggest you to learn some songs from metal bands like metallica, megadeath, anthrax, ... it will be a good exercise. I can give you some guitar pro tabs to practice if you want, just drop me a pm.
hmmm, your tone need more treble imo
thanks jacob and how about
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thanks jacob and how about this rex?
Otherworld
I tried palm mutting some things
yeah, you got it. nice maybe
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yeah, you got it. nice
maybe you can find a more accurate, less fuzzy tone?
thanks for the tips :) and
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thanks for the tips :) and for recording, I'm using my USB cord that came with my amp. i'll try to find one thats less fuzzy but thats how all the presets sound :( tell me what you think of my next one if i can find a better tone. Thanks :)
if you record with a clean
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if you record with a clean tone and add distortion in via editing software it will most likely come out sounding a lot better
edit: this might make the palm muting sound like poop though, im not sure D:
oh ya good idea jacob! I'll
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oh ya good idea jacob! I'll try that after i re-record again, but for now this is what i've got
Otherworld
it's obviously not even close to being done (mixing, effects, noise removal, ect.) but for what it is now, I'd like your opinion, and yes, i am going to add lyrics :)
you has metal voice?
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you has metal voice? :O!~
nah, but i have monster voice
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nah, but i have monster voice :)
wtf?
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wtf?
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RARRR *stomp* RAAAARRRRR auri
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RARRR
*stomp*
RAAAARRRRR
aurisaurus has come to town
rarrr!!!
Auriplane!!
ok final thing, haha, yes i
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ok final thing, haha, yes i sang...
Otherworld
please tell me what ya think! thanks :)
EDIT: i'd also like to know how the mixng is (im still perfecting that)
Re: RARRR *stomp* RAAAARRRRR auri
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lol'd hard
Re: ok final thing, haha, yes i
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legend
you likey?
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you likey?
i think a clean singing
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i think a clean singing wouldn't be bad too !
Use delay on the lead, the bends at the beguining needs more "power", do you play them on 1 or 2 strings ?
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i think i'll stick with
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i think i'll stick with monster singing :) but some delay is a good idea and i play the bends on the 2nd string :)
forgot the delay sorry... the
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forgot the delay sorry...
the bend are on 2 stings : the 1st one on the 10th fret E string and the 13th fret B string.
the 2nd one on the 10th fret B string and 12th fret G string :)
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oh thanks! and for the delay
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oh thanks! and for the delay do you mean the high lead or the continueous rhyhtm guitar?
don't know but you can make
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don't know but you can make it without any delay, your choice
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otherworld thing it should
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otherworld
thing it should goes like that
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oh... ok thanks hash! i got
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oh... ok thanks hash! i got it now :)
alright how bout this?
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alright how bout this? otherworld
nice :) not perfect but nice
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nice :) not perfect but nice ! :)
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And oh, really nice rhythm
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And oh, really nice rhythm tone !!!
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